Originally posted by gemius1011 at 2005-3-8 11:42 AM:
不錯看的說!推~~
Originally posted by 恰恰 at 2005-3-8 02:26 PM:
超讚的拉~~我期待你的續集喔!!
Originally posted by Hsiang-I at 2005-3-9 08:53 AM:
推~
可以出書了~!!
Originally posted by 阿毅 at 2005-3-8 06:26 PM:
瑋哥是誰阿??哈~宏瑋的縮影嗎??
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-9 07:59 PM:
一天沒事的話是兩回連載
所以,不要嗺我稿呀
Originally posted by 佑 at 2005-3-9 07:05 PM:
還不錯看,
不過我覺得有幾個人物要再有點個性,例如那個車行老闆,
而有些對話我覺得稍不妥。
加油ㄅㄟ!!!
[ Last edited by 佑 on 2005-3-9 at 07:09 PM ]
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-10 10:32 AM:
http://love.pchome.com.tw/story/ ... 201545&no=61724
第五回 轉址
本故事純粹虛構,與真實人物、團體等等毫無關聯:lol:
Originally posted by 恰恰 at 2005-3-10 07:04 PM:
妳的每一回都是這麼的精采 期待妳的續集
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-10 08:06 PM:
在此與那些用心看我文章的朋友說聲抱歉。
由於第4、5回我太過於趕稿,整個文章流程變很亂!
我會致力在第六回的寫作上!並將文章加以修訂化。
謝謝大家對我的支持與鼓勵
我會帶給大家一個好故事的:lol:
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-11 09:50 PM:
http://love.pchome.com.tw/story/ ... ;no=61851&my=my
第六回,千辛萬苦出來啦
本故事純粹虛構,與真實人物、團體等等毫無關聯
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-11 09:50 PM:
http://love.pchome.com.tw/story/ ... ;no=61851&my=my
第六回,千辛萬苦出來啦
本故事純粹虛構,與真實人物、團體等等毫無關聯
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 17:22:
希望可以多加入一些18禁的元素與內容~
Originally posted by 祥紫 at 2005-3-13 17:24:
切.....正常點吧你....
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 17:26:
經典電影裡少不了 床戲與吻戲吧
Originally posted by 祥紫 at 2005-3-13 17:28:
也不用太多吧.......
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 05:31 PM:
但是 淫王 是處男ㄟ~
淫王快去取材 破處吧~
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 17:36:
靠~我啥時還是處男:lol:
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 17:36:
靠~我啥時還是處男:lol:
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 05:38 PM:
你去花過錢了喔~
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 17:40:
玩女人幹嘛花錢:lol:
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 05:40 PM:
嘴砲~
我還是處男ㄟ~
Originally posted by 祥紫 at 2005-3-13 05:37 PM:
男主角不會是寫你本人吧.....;)
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 17:41:
有砲友還處男:lol:
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 05:43 PM:
不行嗎??
純純的砲友 [不打砲]
呵呵~
我真的還是 處男~
徵女友唷~~~
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 17:42:
怎麼可能:lol:
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 17:44:
走~去喝花酒
祥紫請客
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 17:44:
走~去喝花酒
祥紫請客
Originally posted by 祥紫 at 2005-3-13 05:45 PM:
喔....寫的挺像你本人的咩...只是車跟技術就....不知了.....
Originally posted by 祥紫 at 2005-3-13 17:45:
喔....寫的挺像你本人的咩...只是車跟技術就....不知了.....
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 05:46 PM:
會像本人嗎????
Originally posted by 祥紫 at 2005-3-13 17:46:
官我啥事....你們嘴戰也跟我有關唷.....
我寧可把錢拿去改車也不會去浪費錢在那種地方啦........
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 05:51 PM:
說的好呀~~
我戒酒了~
而且真有錢跑酒店 不如拿去作善事~
Originally posted by 祥紫 at 2005-3-13 17:50:
喔.....有空出來聊天咩(反台時)....不要老在家..
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 05:53 PM:
妳沒看過 淫王喔
我印象最深的就是它改 [腳煞桿] 後移~
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 05:55 PM:
你還記得呀,改天去大浦跑看看
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 17:55:
你還記得呀,改天去大浦跑看看
Originally posted by wadeking at 2005-3-13 05:57 PM:
找我PK喔~
我走RV風ㄟ~
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 17:56:
話說pchome有個小女生很喜歡檔車來跟我留言:lol:
16歲可以睡覺嗎?
Originally posted by Hsiang-I at 2005-3-13 18:46:
睡下去~只要睡過後會負責就好~!!!!羨慕~~T.T
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 05:56 PM:
話說pchome有個小女生很喜歡檔車來跟我留言:lol:
16歲可以睡覺嗎?
Originally posted by 疏樓狼宿 at 2005-3-13 07:00 PM:
純睡覺可以.......但是如果發生性關係就要被告強姦OR誘拐
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 07:03 PM:
呵呵,我沒這麼瘋狂啦:lol:
你們當我是劉駿弘喔
Originally posted by 疏樓狼宿 at 2005-3-13 19:05:
個人比較煞女教官...制服誘惑:lol:
Originally posted by 疏樓狼宿 at 2005-3-13 07:05 PM:
個人比較煞女教官...制服誘惑:lol:
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-13 07:32 PM:
開Camry的女教官?:lol:
Originally posted by 疏樓狼宿 at 2005-3-13 07:33 PM:
縮雷絲尬!!!!!!!!:lol:
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-15 02:12 PM:
http://love.pchome.com.tw/story/ ... 201545&no=62221
第八回 熱滾滾喔!:lol:
本故事純粹虛構,與真實人物、團體等等毫無關聯
Originally posted by 恰恰 at 2005-3-15 02:23 PM:
讚~~繼續期待:)
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-15 02:27 PM:
這次瑕疵應該比較少了吧:lol:
好看幫我推唷
Originally posted by 恰恰 at 2005-3-15 02:31 PM:
我還請我們班的一起欣賞你的作品 看過都說厲害
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-15 02:31 PM:
:lol:感恩呀!
Originally posted by 狼祐哥 at 2005-3-15 04:43 PM:
你可以出書了....
Originally posted by 追風‧野 at 2005-3-15 05:15 PM:
:lol:那出版社要倒了
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